Re: new editor's draft of WSA available

Hi Chris,

On the same line, I think my SOAP comments[1] on Heather's 
draft[2] were not addressed either...

Cheers,

Jean-Jacques.

[1] http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-ws-arch/2002Oct/0001.html
[2] http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-ws-arch/2002Sep/0296.html

Christopher B Ferris wrote:
> 
> Joel,
> 
> Not ignored, but missed (by me). Appologies. I will look to incorporate 
> these comments
> in a subsequent draft.
> 
> Cheers,
> 
> Christopher Ferris
> Architect, Emerging e-business Industry Architecture
> email: chrisfer@us.ibm.com
> phone: +1 508 234 3624
> 
> Joel Munter wrote on 10/23/2002 02:04:33 PM:
> 
>  > Several weeks ago, I completed a review of Heather's draft "Discovery 
> Words" before they were
>  > incorporated into the WSA draft material.  I see in this latest 
> publication that my suggestions
>  > and comments were ignored and the issues that I addressed with my 
> comments are still present.  I
>  > have re-issue them here for your reference.  Please consider these 
> comments.
>  >  
>  > Original Comments:
>  > Portal UDDI Registry: The following sentence seems a touch awkward. "A
>  > portal UDDI registry runs in the service provider's outside the 
> firewall or
>  > in a DMZ between firewalls." Please consider adding the word 
> "environment"
>  > between provider's and outside. There is the beginning of discussion of
>  > "role-based" visibility here also. There is a similar capability that is
>  > now defined within the UDDI specification itself and should be expected
>  > within vendor-based tools and future registries.
>  >  
>  > This comment "...complete business context and well thought out 
> taxonomies
>  > are essential if the service is to be found be potential service
>  > requestors..." which you have associated with just the [public] UDDI
>  > Business Registry absolutely applies equally to all forms and usages of
>  > registries.
>  >  
>  > Acquiring Service Descriptions: This statement "...Internal Enterprise
>  > Application UDDI registries and Partner Catalog UDDI registries will 
> require
>  > no pre screening to establish trust of the service..." is not true. I 
> might
>  > host a web service within my enterprise and still need to establish a 
> level
>  > of working "trust" with (internal) users of the service.
>  >  
>  > I like to describe WSIL as getting a business card from someone that 
> I have
>  > already met or someone that I have been introduced to. The "business 
> card"
>  > provides a rich set of very specific information. If you agree with this
>  > analogy, then you might want to add something to that affect.
>  >  
>  > Joel
>  >  
>  >  
>  > -----Original Message-----
>  > From: Christopher B Ferris [mailto:chrisfer@us.ibm.com]
>  > Sent: Monday, October 21, 2002 9:44 AM
>  > To: www-ws-arch@w3.org
>  > Subject: new editor's draft of WSA available
> 
>  >
>  > All,
>  >
>  > I've incorporated Eric and Heather's material with some tweaks. I 
> have also included the harvesting
>  > material as is (so we don't forget it:) I haven't included the 
> management material as yet
>  > because I understand that the MGT TF wants to noodle on that work 
> some more before
>  > they are ready to have it integrated (requiring a format change to 
> XML). I believe that they
>  > want to defer this until after the f2f.
>  >
>  > Anyway, here's the latest WSA:
>  >
>  >         
> http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2002/ws/arch/wsa/wd-wsa-arch.html
>  >
>  > As always, comments welcomed. Note that I still need to update some 
> of the graphics
>  > to reflect naming changes we have (I think) settled on to a certain 
> extent. Please let's
>  > not get sucked into the vortex of endless debating over terms simply 
> because I was
>  > only able to find older representations of certain graphics. These 
> will be updated!
>  >
>  > Remember, this is ONLY A DRAFT! :)
>  >
>  > Cheers,
>  >
>  > Christopher Ferris
>  > Architect, Emerging e-business Industry Architecture
>  > email: chrisfer@us.ibm.com
>  > phone: +1 508 234 3624
>  > ----- Message from "Munter, Joel D" <joel.d.munter@intel.com> on Thu, 
> 26 Sep 2002 13:40:05 -0700 -----
>  >
>  > To:
>  >
>  > www-ws-arch@w3.org
>  >
>  > Subject:
>  >
>  > RE: Discovery words
>  >
>  > Hi Heather,
>  > Is this what you are intending for inclusion into the WSAWG spec?  If 
> so,
>  > then please include it and let's just review one document.  I would 
> like to
>  > see the graphics.
>  > Line numbers would help when providing comments.
>  > While WSDL is absolutely preferred, there are other mechanisms for 
> discovery
>  > of a web service's methods and input and output parameters.  For 
> instance,
>  > Microsoft tools offer "reflection."  Maybe we should just state that 
> WSDL is
>  > preferred.
>  > Portal UDDI Registry: The following sentence seems a touch awkward.  "A
>  > portal UDDI registry runs in the service provider's outside the 
> firewall or
>  > in a DMZ between firewalls."  Please consider adding the word 
> "environment"
>  > between provider's and outside.  There is the beginning of discussion of
>  > "role-based" visibility here also.  There is a similar capability 
> that is
>  > now defined within the UDDI specification itself and should be expected
>  > within vendor-based tools and future registries.
>  >  
>  > This comment "...complete business context and well thought out 
> taxonomies
>  > are essential if the service is to be found be potential service
>  > requestors..." which you have associated with just the [public] UDDI
>  > Business Registry absolutely applies equally to all forms and usages of
>  > registries.
>  > Acquiring Service Descriptions: This statement "...Internal Enterprise
>  > Application UDDI registries and Partner Catalog UDDI registries will 
> require
>  > no pre screening to establish trust of the service..." is not true. 
>  I might
>  > host a web service within my enterprise and still need to establish a 
> level
>  > of working "trust" with (internal) users of the service.
>  > I like to describe WSIL as getting a business card from someone that 
> I have
>  > already met or someone that I have been introduced to.  The "business 
> card"
>  > provides a rich set of very specific information.  If you agree with 
> this
>  > analogy, then you might want to add something to that affect.
>  > Joel
>  >
>  > -----Original Message-----
>  > From: Heather Kreger [mailto:kreger@us.ibm.com]
>  > Sent: Wednesday, September 25, 2002 2:06 AM
>  > To: www-ws-arch@w3.org
>  > Subject: Discovery words
>  >
>  >
>  >
>  >
> 
>  > Folks,
>  > Here are the words I had for what I called the Registry Stack. I 
> tried to
>  > rename it to the Discovery Agency (I'm still uncomfortable with this
>  > name... any other ideas?).  Again, these words are plaguerized from 
> our Web
>  > Services Conceptual Architecture paper (http://www.ibm.com/webservices,
>  > click on resources and scroll down).  Of course this is just a starter
>  > set...
>  > (See attached file: HKsContribution.discoveryagency.htm)
>  > Heather Kreger
>  > Web Services Lead Architect
>  > STSM, SWG Emerging Technology
>  > kreger@us.ibm.com
>  > 919-543-3211 (t/l 441)  cell:919-496-9572

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