RE: Updated requirements document

just to follow up on my comment i propose to substitute "encourage" with "advance".
thanks,
ayse

-----Original Message-----
From: Dilber, Ayse, ALASO 
Sent: Thursday, April 25, 2002 9:06 AM
To: Austin, Daniel; www-ws-arch@w3.org
Subject: RE: Updated requirements document


I think the verbs we use to define requirements should be measurable.  Some of those in the updated requirements document are not, e.g. "encourage", "ensure", etc.  Could we discuss this during the confcall?
Thanks,
Ayse

-----Original Message-----
From: Austin, Daniel [mailto:Austin.D@ic.grainger.com]
Sent: Thursday, April 25, 2002 1:09 AM
To: www-ws-arch@w3.org
Cc: 'Christopher Ferris'
Subject: Updated requirements document


Greetings,

	I've updated the requirements document to reflect all of the
feedback I have received so far. Thanks to everyone for their feedback. Many
improvements have been made.

	The new version is here:
http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/arch/2/wd-wsawg-reqs-04242002.html


	Changes:

	#16 has been reworded
	#7 has been cleaned up and made more sensible
	some renumbering has been done
	lists have been made consistent
	many typos fixed
	various bits of wording changed

Regards,


D-

Received on Thursday, 25 April 2002 16:02:25 UTC