RE: Face-toface review draft of requirements document

Thanks for the clarification, Daniel.
Joe
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Austin, Daniel [mailto:Austin.D@ic.grainger.com]
> Sent: Monday, April 01, 2002 8:53 PM
> To: Joseph Hui; www-ws-arch@w3.org
> Subject: RE: Face-toface review draft of requirements document
> 
> 
> Hi Joe,
> 
> 	Eventually the requirements will be moved to their own 
> section; for
> the moment, I've decided to leave them where they are until 
> they are out of
> draft status, so that their relationship to the overall goals 
> is more clear
> when reading the document. We'll fix this after the 
> face-to-face meeting.
> 
> Regards,
> 
> D-
> 
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Joseph Hui [mailto:jhui@digisle.net]
> > Sent: Monday, April 01, 2002 8:45 PM
> > To: Austin, Daniel; www-ws-arch@w3.org
> > Subject: RE: Face-toface review draft of requirements document
> > 
> > 
> > Hi Daniel, Sharad, & Abbie,
> > 
> > Thanks for stitching up the texts.
> > It was no small feat for sure.
> > 
> > Here's my immediate feedback.  Since the current version is the
> > last prior to the upcoming F2F, let's treat the following as a
> > to-do reminder.
> > 
> > In the Section 2.2.2 Goals, subsection D-AG0006, the requirements
> > text doesn't belong there.  They should be in a subsection under
> > Section 3, Requirements.
> > 
> > Regards,
> > 
> > Joe Hui
> > Exodus, a Cable & Wireless service
> > ========================================
> > 
> > > -----Original Message-----
> > > From: Austin, Daniel [mailto:Austin.D@ic.grainger.com]
> > > Sent: Monday, April 01, 2002 5:12 PM
> > > To: www-ws-arch@w3.org
> > > Subject: Face-toface review draft of requirements document
> > > 
> > > 
> > > Gentlebeings,
> > > 
> > > 	Thanks to the valiant efforts of my co-editors, I've 
> > > uploaded yet
> > > another updated version of the requirements draft (editor's 
> > > copy). This
> > > version is the last that will be published prior to the 
> > > face-to-face meeting
> > > in San Jose. This version includes the most recent wording of 
> > > the draft
> > > goals as well as associated CSFs and proposed requirements. 
> > > 
> > > 	I've not edited all of the text proposed by champions for their
> > > goals. Nor have i modified the ordering or presentation 
> > > beyond trying to fit
> > > the text into the document in a reasonable fashion.
> > > 
> > > http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/arch/2/wd-wsawg-reqs-04012002.html
> > > 
> > > 	Please send all comments to me and CC the mailing list as well. 
> > > 
> > > 	Thanks to Sharad and Abbie for all their hard work!
> > > 
> > > Regards,
> > > 
> > > D- 
> > > 
> > > **************************************************************
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> > > Dr. Daniel Austin, Sr. Technical Architect
> > > austin.d@ic.grainger.com (847) 793 5044
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> > > 
> > > "Sapere Aude!"
> > > 
> > > 
> > > 
> > > 
> > 
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