Re: Overview document

Sandro Hawke wrote:

>>"The suggested reading order of the first four documents is as given, 
>>since they have
>> been listed in increasing degree of technical content."
>>
>>(I could add something to state that
>>    "the last two documents complete the documentation set .)
>>    
>>
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>My sense is that the section as currently written is clear enough, but
>if Frank feels strongly that the implied reading order is not clear
>enough, I don't see any problem with your proposed change.
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>>dan/sandro - should i put this in my editors draft right after the 
>>listing in the roadmap?  (I released control on friday so i have not 
>>made any changes since then and do not want to hinder your release process.)
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>That sounds fine.  (I think I would have heard had Dan done anything
>with them since then; if he has, I'll take responsibility for
>propagating this change through.)
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>    -- sandro
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OK - change made in the normal place for the editor's draft.  that is 
the only change i made since i gave up write lock and i will not make 
any more (unless there is another request communicated).

feel free to do whatever you need to do to push the publication through.

thx,
d

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