- From: Martin Duerst <duerst@w3.org>
- Date: Wed, 28 Jul 2004 14:54:40 +0900
- To: RJ Auburn <rj@voxeo.com>, Chris Lilley <chris@w3.org>, Larry Masinter <LMM@acm.org>
- Cc: 'Dan Connolly' <connolly@w3.org>, www-voice@w3.org, Dave Raggett <dsr@w3.org>, ietf-types@iana.org, w3c-archive@w3.org, ietf-xml-mime@imc.org
At 14:37 04/07/27 -0700, RJ Auburn wrote: >Chris: > >Comments and replies are inline. Let me know if there are any other issues: > > >On 07/22/2004 11:05, "Chris Lilley" <chris@w3.org> wrote: > > I agree that this sort of context, although obvious when the W3C > > document as a whole is studies, is fairly opaque when a single appendix > > is extracted and sent as an email message. > > > > Prepending the 'Abstract' of the specification, and giving a link to the > > full specification, would be helpful. > > >Sorry. I should have done this. >Martin: any chance we could update the w3c page with some examples of what >should be sent to this list? I think it might be helpful to have some >pointers to good example requests. Yes. For that, we first have to have good examples. I'm looking forward to use your next mail to this list as such an example. > >>> Published specification: > >>> > >>> This media type registration is for CCXML documents as > >>> described by this specification. > > > > 'This specification' should be a link to the main page of the document, > > even if that is a link to itself for a short document, and inline URIs > > should be indicated in the ascii text version by a numbered link [1] > > > > [1] http://example.org/like/this > >This section now reads: > >Published specification: > > This media type registration is for XML bodies that > conform to the DTD/Schema referenced in Appendix B and C and > interpreted by the rules of the CCXML specification [1]. > > [1] http://www.w3.org/tr/ccxml/ I personally think that this kind of '[1]' citation is a bit of overkill. If you get that from a text conversion on the W3C Web site, feel free to use it. But I think something like This media type registration is for XML bodies that conform to the DTD/Schema referenced in Appendix B and C and interpreted by the rules of the CCXML specification at http://www.w3.org/tr/ccxml/. is more readable, and more popular in plain text formats such as email. >Ok, this is what it will look like now: > >Magic number(s): > >There is no single initial octet sequence that is always present in CCXML >documents. This media type is expected to be handled by an XML processor, as >indicated by "+xml". XML processors may detect CCXML by its namespace URI, >http://www.w3.org/2002/09/ccxml > >Is this ok with folks? Okay with me. Regards, Martin.
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