- From: Noah Mendelsohn <nrm@arcanedomain.com>
- Date: Sun, 07 Oct 2012 02:06:07 -0400
- To: Jeni Tennison <jeni@jenitennison.com>
- CC: "www-tag@w3.org" <www-tag@w3.org>
Jeni, Here are some notes on the draft. Editorial --------- * Abstract: and for authors that publish documents that are intended to be used with fragids --> and for authors >who< publish documents that are intended to be used with fragids * "Problems arise when a media type wishes to adopt several fragid structures because of its similarity with other media types and/or its use of a metaformat." I'm not sure that media types "wish" for anything. Perhaps: "Problems arise when there is a need for a media type to adopt multiple fragid structures, perhaps because of the type's similarity to other media types and/or its use of a metaformat." * "SVG is only one example of a media type in which conflicts between different uses of fragids occur" --> "SVG is only one example of a media type in which conflicts >among< different uses of fragids occur" (I can see this on either way) ...more to come... Noah
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