- From: ashok malhotra <ashok.malhotra@oracle.com>
- Date: Wed, 23 Nov 2011 09:55:18 -0800
- To: Jonathan Rees <jar@creativecommons.org>
- CC: "www-tag@w3.org" <www-tag@w3.org>
Jonathan: A new version of Identifying Application State is available at: http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/doc/IdentifyingApplicationState-20111130 This contains changes in response to your comments in: http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-tag/2011Sep/0089.html Here is how your comments have been addressed: Need explanations or references [] for abbreviations used to improve the reach and durability of the document: IRI [AM] Added reference to RFC 3987 and 3987bis idref [AM] Added reference to XML Schema where this is defined CDN [AM] Replaced the abbreviation by Content Deleviry Networks XHR [AM] Added reference to XMLHttpRequest2 Re "not defined by the HTML specification" -- architecturally the # practice would have to derive from the media type registration, not the HTML spec. The distinction would be academic if the registration defined fragid semantics by reference to the spec, or if the spec *was* the registration, but from a FYN perspective it's the registration that has responsibility. You could just change "specification" to "media type registration". [AM] Done Editorial nit, there should be no hyphen in "information on the client-side" (non-adjectival compound). All the other "client-side"s are adjectival and therefore correct, so don't change those. [AM] Done Please let us know if this is satisfactory. -- All the best, Ashok
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