Re: Draft of TAG Submission to W3C Workshop on Web of Services for Enterprise Computing from Dan Connolly on 2007-01-09 (www-tag@w3.org from January 2007)

From: Dan Connolly <connolly@w3.org>
Date: Tue, 09 Jan 2007 10:58:35 -0600
To: noah_mendelsohn@us.ibm.com
Cc: www-tag@w3.org
Message-Id: <1168361915.4882.159.camel@dirk>

On Thu, 2007-01-04 at 11:13 -0500, noah_mendelsohn@us.ibm.com wrote:
[...]
> I invite review of this document from the community, but especially from 
> the TAG, because it is intended to capture our position.

Good stuff.

After reading the 1st use case, I wondered what happened to WADL
and such, but I see it comes in later.

Also, "Suggested Reading" connotes "you should read this". Perhaps
tone it down to "References" or "Related Works" or something,
as in "FYI".

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Dan Connolly, W3C http://www.w3.org/People/Connolly/
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