New WebArch editor's draft

Hello world,

I've completed making the changes approved by the TAG in response to
comments on the PR draft. You can find the new draft[1], a diff[2]
From the PR document, and yet another pdf[3] in

  http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/2004/webarch-20041203/

The diffing process sprinkled some spurious changes throughout. It had
something to do with newlines and whitespace in paragraphs that have
been reformatted since the PR. A whitespace problem in an XML tool, go
figure.

So here's what's really substantively changed:

1. The paragraphs after the good practice note in Section 4.3[4].
2. The definition of 'namespace document' in the Glossary[5].
3. The word 'immediate' was removed from point 2 in Section 4.5.1[6].

                                        Be seeing you,
                                          norm

[1] http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/2004/webarch-20041203/
[2] http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/2004/webarch-20041203/diff-20041105.html
[3] http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/2004/webarch-20041203/webarch.pdf
[4] http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/2004/webarch-20041203/Overview.html#pci
[5] http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/2004/webarch-20041203/Overview.html#index
[6] http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/2004/webarch-20041203/Overview.html#xml-when

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Norman.Walsh@Sun.COM / XML Standards Architect / Sun Microsystems, Inc.
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