SVG12: 10.4 grammar

Dear Scalable Vector Graphics Working Group,

  From http://www.w3.org/TR/2005/WD-SVGMobile12-20050413/text.html
section 10.4, "Whether the given element represents can be edited by the
user." This sentence seems incorrect or at least incomprehensible.
Please change the draft such that it uses correct and comprehensible
language.

regards.
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Received on Sunday, 17 April 2005 22:58:41 UTC