Fixed as you suggested, thank you for the feedback. From: CE Whitehead <cewcathar@hotmail.com<mailto:cewcathar@hotmail.com>> Date: Friday, November 8, 2013 12:21 PM To: fantasai <fantasai.lists@inkedblade.net<mailto:fantasai.lists@inkedblade.net>>, "www-style@w3.org<mailto:www-style@w3.org>" <www-style@w3.org<mailto:www-style@w3.org>> Subject: RE: [CSSWG][css-text-3] CSS3 Text Last Call Working Draft Resent-From: <www-style@w3.org<mailto:www-style@w3.org>> Resent-Date: Friday, November 8, 2013 12:21 PM 7.3.2 par 1 "When determining expansion opportunities, characters from the Unicode Symbols (S*) and Punctuation (P*) classes are generally treated the same as a letter:" { COMMENT: "characters" is a plural noun; "letter" is a singular; this sentence would read better if both were either singular or plural; so you have two options -- either make "letter" plural or somehow make "characters" singular. } => "When determining expansion opportunities, characters from the Unicode Symbols (S*) and Punctuation (P*) classes are generally treated the same as letters:" OR => "When determining expansion opportunities, a character from the Unicode Symbols (S*) or Punctuation (P*) classes are generally treated the same as a letter:"Received on Thursday, 14 November 2013 04:16:11 UTC
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