- From: Simon Sapin <simon.sapin@exyr.org>
- Date: Sun, 26 May 2013 11:11:07 +0800
- To: www-style list <www-style@w3.org>
In a bunch of places, the work "token" seems to have been accidentally removed when switching to the 〈〉 notation. For example: "Emit a 〈(〉." §2 Each declaration […] finished with a semicolon. → Declarations are separated by semicolons. This makes a difference for the last declaration of a block. (If not applying this change, s/finished/finishes/) They can have CSS values following their name, but they end with a {}-wrapped block, similar to a rule. s/rule/qualified rule/ ? Same in the next sentence. §3, §3.1 User agents must use the parsing rules described in this specification to generate the CSSOM trees from text/css resources. The output is a CSSStyleSheet object. Is Syntax expected to gain another section that describes how to build a CSSOM tree? If not remove mentions of CSSOM here. §3.2 The stream of Unicode code points […] will be initially seen by the user agent as a stream of bytes s/will/may/ Eg. for HTML <style> elements, the CSS parser gets text nodes’ parsed Unicode value from the HTML parser, but never sees bytes. §4.2 This section should define "character" as a single Unicode codepoint. (Other CSS modules such as Text may have a different definition.) Now that "non-ASCII" starts at U+0080, "non-printable" should be changed to stop at U+007F and not include U+0080 to U+009F. Also, "non-printable" should include U+000B LINE TABULATION in order to match CSS 2.1’s definition of unquoted URL token. Note that U+000D CARRIAGE RETURN and U+000C FORM FEED are not included in this definition, as they are removed from the stream during preprocessing. s/removed from the stream/converted to U+000A LINE FEED/ And link "preprocessing" to the relevant section. §4.3.1 U+0023 NUMBER SIGN (#) If the next three input characters would start an identifier or would start a number, create a 〈hash〉 token This isn’t right, as it creates a hash tokens for these: #.1 #+1 #+.1 Instead, you want "If the next input character is a name character or the next two input character are a valid escape, create a 〈hash〉 token" In the data state, U+002B PLUS SIGN (+) and U+002E FULL STOP (.) do the same thing and could be merged. Or do you prefer keeping codepoint order? §4.3.7. Ident state "〈input〉" looks like a token type but maybe shouldn’t? §4.3.11. Number-end state This section could be simplified by directy checking "starts with an identifier" and not special-case name-start, \ and - §4.3.18. Bad-URL state EOF This is a parse error. This is probably not needed: whatever condition had the state machine switch to the bad-URL state was already a parse error. U+005C REVERSE SOLIDUS This doesn’t do anything. It could be removed and let the "anything else" clause do its job. -- Simon Sapin
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