Re: [css3-background] Preparing for Last Call

On Tuesday 06 October 2009, fantasai wrote:
> Bert Bos wrote:
> > 3.5. The 'background-attachment' property
> >
> > The information in the first three paragraphs is correct in itself,
> > but seems to be in a somewhat illogical order. I don't have a
> > suggestion for better text, though.
>
> Ok, I've tweaked the text there. Let me know what you think.

Yes, that helps.



Bert
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