Re: [css3text] Remarks

Innovimax SARL wrote:
> Dear,
> 
> In http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css3-text/
> 
> Editor's Draft $Date: 2007-11-03 05:17:13 $
> 
> In 8.1 Line Decoration: Underline, Overline, and Strike-Through
> 
> The image is not available at this location :
> http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css3-text/images/underline-example.png

Fixed.

> In 8.2 Emphasis Marks: the 'text-emphasis' property
> 
> The table "Preferred emphasis mark and ruby position" has one extra
> column. Please remove it

Fixed.

> In 11 Changes from the June 2005 CSS3 Text WD
> 
> Remove the last bullet point

Fixed.

> In 13 References
> 
> Please precise for RFC2119 the date "March 1997"

Fixed.

> Not sure to understand the policy for cited names
> 
> Ok with "Bert Bos et al." (remove the semi colon) for CSS21

Fixed.

> But CSS3BG should rather be "Tim Boland, Bert Bos"

Fixed except: Bert Bos is the primary author, so I listed him first.

> For CSS3Color, "Tantek Çelik, Chris Lilley et al." may be more fair

Fixed.

> UAX 14 is both in normative and informative (please remove one of them)
> Furthermore It has been updated to version 19 in 2006-08-22

Switched to the draft
   http://unicode.org/reports/tr14/tr14-20.html
and made normative.

> For UAX24, please add "Asmus Freytag" as author

Fixed.

Thanks for your review!

~fantasai

Received on Saturday, 3 November 2007 20:18:17 UTC