Re: [css3-namespace] 3.2 Scope Needs Rephrasing

Lachlan Hunt wrote:
> 
> Hi,
>   I found the paragraph in section 3.2 difficult to comprehend.  I 
> suggest it be rephrased like this:
> 
> The namespace prefix is declared only within the style sheet in which 
> its @namespace rule appears.  It is not declared within any style sheets 
> importing, or imported by, that style sheet, nor any other style sheets 
> applying to the document.

Ok, I've changed it to:

   <p>The namespace prefix is declared only within the style sheet in which its
     @namespace rule appears. It is not declared in any style sheets importing or
     imported by that style sheet, nor in any other style sheets applying to the
     document.</p>

Is that ok?

~fantasai