- From: Susan Lesch <lesch@w3.org>
- Date: Fri, 7 Feb 2003 21:16:14 -0800
- To: www-style@w3.org
Hello, These are minor editorial comments for your CSS TV Profile 1.0 Candidate Recommendation [1]. For the status section (most of these will go away): s/Status of this document/Status of This Document/ s/2002 May 15/15 May 2002/ s/Last Call Review/Last Call review/ s/the exit criteria is met/the exit criteria are met/ s/a web browser/a Web browser/ s/UA/user agent (UA)/ (for first occurrence) s/publically/publicly/ I saw only two typos: In 2, HTML 4.0 [HTML40] needs a link. In 7, s/stylesheets/style sheets/ In Acknowledgments: s/members of the CSS working group/participants in the CSS Working Group/ (to match the Process Document, see http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Process-20010719/groups.html#GroupsWG) RFC 2119 key words can be marked up like this: http://www.w3.org/2001/06/manual/#RFCs (This is especially true for this module. "TV-UA MUST" is hard to read.) Normative references should 1) point to dated specs, and 2) have no live URI links. Here is the guideline for citing references: http://www.w3.org/2001/06/manual/#References [1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2002/CR-css-tv-20020807 Best wishes for your project, -- Susan Lesch http://www.w3.org/People/Lesch/ mailto:lesch@w3.org tel:+1.858.483.4819 World Wide Web Consortium (W3C) http://www.w3.org/
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