Re: WD-CSS21-20020802 section 9, "Visual formatting model", editorial suggestions from natej@excite.co.jp on 2002-11-15 (www-style@w3.org from November 2002)

From: <natej@excite.co.jp>
Date: 15 Nov 2002 19:00:40 +0900
To: fantasai@escape.com
Cc: www-style@w3.org
Message-ID: <20021115100040.2520.cpmta@c000.nrt.cp.net>

> > Change "it visually becomes part of" to "of which, visually, it is a part".
> 
> Take out the commas. "visually" should not be parenthesized like that,
> since it is an important qualifier to "is a part".


that would result in "of which visually it is a part" which would then need to be changed to "of which it is visually a part"

no?

nate

Received on Friday, 15 November 2002 05:01:07 UTC