- From: Brant Langer Gurganus <brantgurganus2001@cherokeescouting.org>
- Date: Thu, 12 Dec 2002 21:13:07 -0500
- To: www-style@w3.org
- Message-ID: <3DF94233.4000803@cherokeescouting.org>
http://www.w3.org/TR/2002/WD-css-style-attr-20020515
* There should be no comma in the first sentence of the Abstract.
* There should be a comma after "As a draft document" in the second
paragraph under "Status of this document".
* In the same paragraph, the last sentence should read "…as
reference materials or to cite them as anything other than "works
in progress.".
* There should be no comma in the first sentence of the second
paragraph above the Table of contents.
* The link in the following paragraph should include the fragment
identifier for the Working Drafts section.
* If the headings are to be numbered, it should be done via <ol> or
stylesheet if possible.
* Instead of putting "style" in quotation marks, it should be in the
<code> element and be styled with monospaced font.
* "whose" should be avoided in the first sentence under "History"
since the "style" attribute is not a person.
* There should be a comma after "but" in the first sentence under
"History"
* The comma after "by default" should be removed.
* There is no need for parentheses in the first sentence.
* In my opinion, the examples do not have a different meaning in a
different order so <ul> should be used instead of <ol>.
* Throughout the examples, should the ellipsis character be used
instead of three periods. Three periods have a different meaning
that an ellipse even if they look the same.
* The second and third examples seem to be missing semicolon separators.
* Which has precedence in the case of : <font color="red"
style="color: green">. I have never seen that question answered.
* In the sample text of the example rigth before profiles, should
"one-off" be "on-off"?
* There should be no comma in the second sentence of "Extra
constraints" for 5.2.
* For 5.3, should "N/A." be "None." for consistency.
* Should CSS1 be referenced since it is mentioned in section 5?
* Should CSS3 be referenced?
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Brant Langer Gurganus
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