- From: Brant Langer Gurganus <brantgurganus2001@cherokeescouting.org>
- Date: Thu, 12 Dec 2002 21:13:07 -0500
- To: www-style@w3.org
- Message-ID: <3DF94233.4000803@cherokeescouting.org>
http://www.w3.org/TR/2002/WD-css-style-attr-20020515 * There should be no comma in the first sentence of the Abstract. * There should be a comma after "As a draft document" in the second paragraph under "Status of this document". * In the same paragraph, the last sentence should read "…as reference materials or to cite them as anything other than "works in progress.". * There should be no comma in the first sentence of the second paragraph above the Table of contents. * The link in the following paragraph should include the fragment identifier for the Working Drafts section. * If the headings are to be numbered, it should be done via <ol> or stylesheet if possible. * Instead of putting "style" in quotation marks, it should be in the <code> element and be styled with monospaced font. * "whose" should be avoided in the first sentence under "History" since the "style" attribute is not a person. * There should be a comma after "but" in the first sentence under "History" * The comma after "by default" should be removed. * There is no need for parentheses in the first sentence. * In my opinion, the examples do not have a different meaning in a different order so <ul> should be used instead of <ol>. * Throughout the examples, should the ellipsis character be used instead of three periods. Three periods have a different meaning that an ellipse even if they look the same. * The second and third examples seem to be missing semicolon separators. * Which has precedence in the case of : <font color="red" style="color: green">. I have never seen that question answered. * In the sample text of the example rigth before profiles, should "one-off" be "on-off"? * There should be no comma in the second sentence of "Extra constraints" for 5.2. * For 5.3, should "N/A." be "None." for consistency. * Should CSS1 be referenced since it is mentioned in section 5? * Should CSS3 be referenced? -- Brant Langer Gurganus http://troop545.cjb.net/brant.htm
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