Thesis draft: TO review

DEar Sir,
My name is Syed SUmair Moiz.
Intelligent software agents is my final year thesis
topic.
I am going to submit this thesis in coming month.
CAn you please comments some lines on my thesis.
SO that i can add/ subtract relevant and irrleveant
things from my thesis.

Regards,
Syed Sumair
BSCS Final year
KarachiUniversity 
Pakistan.



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