- From: Susan Lesch <lesch@macvirus.com>
- Date: Sat, 30 Jan 1999 21:16:57 -0700
- To: www-rdf-comments@w3.org
> Review comments on this specification should be sent by 2359Z
> February 3, 1999
Based on one reading, here are minor typo reports for the RDF Model and
Syntax PR [1], which as far as I saw, is remarkably free from errors. Sorry
for the beginner's questions, and for any mistakes introduced here. Quotes
are indented four spaces; comments and questions are in brackets.
1. Introduction, line 211
to facilitate the definition of metadata RDF will have
[A comma would help.] ^
to facilitate the definition of metadata, RDF will have
2.1.- 2.1.1.
anchor ID
[On line 286, ID is capitalized; on line 315, id is lowercase. I would
choose caps.]
2.2., line 493
[15] string ::= (any XML text, with "<", ">", and "&" escaped)
^
and 6., line 1710
[6.24] string ::= (any XML text, with "<", ">", and "&" escaped)
^
[Are "'" and """ escaped also?]
2.2.1.
line 538
more than one ID attribute
^
[Could be TT here like ID is elsewhere.]
line 596
this metadata author is using to define her use
^
this metadata author is using to define her or his use
[I'd say gender here is unknown, and could be skipped or replaced with "the".]
lines 604-632
The complete XML document containing the description above would be:
<?xml version="1.0"?>
^
[Are these three examples "complete," or do they need "standalone='yes'"?]
6.
line 2017
Gramatically
^
Grammatically
line 2170
recent articles - library science
^
recent articles -- library science
[Maybe that could match the double-dashes on lines 868 and 2810.]
Also, maybe all prose example sentences can end in a period (.). (Lines
332, 383, 571, 991, 972, 1079, 1297, 1305, and 1525 have none.)
[1] http://www.w3.org/TR/1999/PR-rdf-syntax-19990105
Best wishes for your project,
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Susan Lesch <mailto:lesch@macvirus.com>
Mac Virus <http://www.macvirus.com/>
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