- From: Lynne Rosenthal <lynne.rosenthal@nist.gov>
- Date: Mon, 27 Sep 2004 22:23:55 -0400
- To: www-qa-wg@w3.org, lofton Henderson <lofton@rockynet.com>
- Message-Id: <5.1.0.14.2.20040927222032.00aa37e8@mailserver.nist.gov>
Reading through the Primer and User Scenarios - found these typos, grammar, etc. No real issues, but I did have a question as to the meaning of a few things. 1. Spell out 'spec’ 2 Introduction Add (planned) after Test Guidelines [QAF-TEST] 3. Audiences All Participants Change last ‘specifications’ to ‘specification’ Spec editors and authors (remove spec or make it capital S) - add ‘of’ after understanding - change order of ‘examples, tools, and templates’ to ‘examples, templates and tools’ (this is also consistent with how it is listed later) - reword last part of last sentence since SpecGL does more than structure and formats (in fact it doesn’t do much of that). Suggest, ‘…valuable resource in organizing and writing a high-quality specification, facilitating its production. 3. First Step QA commitment, 2nd paragraph remove ‘the’, ‘…and if the it is able to anticipate…’ 4. Planning and Writing the Spec modify the list remove ‘writing with test assertions reword first bullet to ‘conformance policy, clause and claims’ reword last bullet to ‘profiles, levels, modules’ 5. Reviewing and Progressing the Spec 2nd para, ‘…it gives and informed set of evaluation criteria’ what is meant by ‘informed set’ last paragraph, suggest remove ‘conformance’ from ‘..significant conformance test materials…’ This would make it a broader statement. The tests may not be conformance tests. --regards lynne
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