Re: AI-2004-06-15-xx: QAH 1.3. Audience and purpose Rewording

The second bullet is incomplete. If we say "more effective" this must be 
followed by "than <some alternative>".

How about adding "than to prescribe and prohibit"?

Karl Dubost wrote:

> AI-2004-06-15-xx: QAH 1.3. Audience and purpose Rewording
>
> * OLD TEXT
> """Because there is no normative content in QAH, conformance to QAH is 
> not an issue. QAH takes this approach for several reasons, chiefly:
>
>     •     because of the diversity amongst W3C's working groups, it is 
> difficult  (but not impossible) to craft simple normative rules for all;
>     •     as past experience has shown, imposing such rules in 
> diverse,  people-centric processes is often not well received -- too 
> authoritarian  and fierce."""
>
> ===>
>
> * NEW TEXT
> """Conformance to QAH is not necessary, because the QAH has no 
> normative content.  QAH takes this approach for several reasons, chiefly:
>
>     •     because of the diversity amongst W3C's working groups, it is 
> difficult  (but not impossible) to craft simple normative rules for all;
>     •     because in diverse, people-centric processes, it is more 
> effective to encourage and help."""
>
>

Received on Tuesday, 15 June 2004 18:08:46 UTC