Variability in Specifications - comments from Lynne Rosenthal on 2004-08-22 (www-qa-wg@w3.org from August 2004)

From: Lynne Rosenthal <lynne.rosenthal@nist.gov>
Date: Sun, 22 Aug 2004 15:42:59 -0400
To: Dominique Hazaël-Massieux <dom@w3.org>
Cc: www-qa-wg@w3.org
Message-Id: <5.1.0.14.2.20040822153818.00aa0aa8@mailserver.nist.gov>

Hi Dom

Thank you for putting this all together.  Its good that we don't lose this 
information (from SpecGL) - it is good stuff.

A few suggestions.....

Scope and Goal -
1st paragraph
s/analyses/analyzes/
remove 'two'  - since it can be how much any number of implementations may vary
remove ',' after the '-'
s/distinguishes/presents/

2nd paragraph
remove the ',' after interoperability

Structure of the document
s/analyses/analyzes/


--lynne

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