Re: Comments for PR-MathML2-20010108

Hi Susan.

Thanks for the comments.  Here is the change log.

> 3.2.5.2 par. after table is repeated, for the most part, in 3.3.4.2
> (mstyle).

I removed the superfluous parts of the overlap.

> All six paragraphs of 3.2.2.2 Color-related attributes are
> repeated in 3.3.4.2 except the mention of mathcolor. They should only
> appear in one place.

I changed the material in 3.3.4.2 to a reference to 3.2.2.2.

> 3.2.1.1 par. 2 and 3, and 3.2.2 pars. 6 and 7
> Is "Math Alphabet" a proper noun?
> http://www.unicode.org/unicode/alloc/Pipeline.html and 
> http://www.egt.ie/standards/iso10646/plane1-roadmap-table.html
> say "Mathematical Alphanumeric Symbols." From here on, I adopt
> that.
> 
> 3.2.1.1 par. 3
> in Section 6.2.3 [Mathematical Alphabetic Symbol Characters.].
> in Section 6.2.3 [Mathematical Alphanumeric Symbols].

Done.

> 3.2.2 par. 5
> renderers have a complete freedom
> renderers have complete freedom

Done.

> 3.2.2 third to last par.
> Tokens elements
> Token elements

Done.

> 3.2.2.1 par. 2
> Math Alphabetic character
> Mathematical Alphanumeric Symbol

Done.

> 3.2.2.2 par. 1
> depreciated color
> deprecated color

Done.

> 3.2.3.2 last par.
> Math Alphabet characters
> Mathematical Alphanumeric Symbols

Done.

> [Mathematical Alphabetic Symbol Characters.]
> [Mathematical Alphanumeric Symbols]

Done.

> 3.2.5.1 par. 1
> braces
> curly brackets

I gathered we decided to stick with braces.

> 3.2.6.4 par. 2
> in the sum (see Section 3.2.3 [Identifier (mi)], mi).
> in the sum; (see Section 3.2.3 [Identifier (mi)]).


Done. Thanks for the proper punctuation. I'd wondered.

> 3.5.5.10 par. 1
> a MathML applications
> a MathML application

Done.

> 3.6.1.1 par. 2
> "described in Section 7.2.2 [Handling of Errors] on the treatment
> of MathML errors." can be cut to "described in Section 7.2.2
> [Handling of Errors]."

Done.

> 7. last par.
> working group [twice]
> Working Group

Done.

> 7.1.3 par. 4 can be revised and link to [RFC3023] and
> http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc3023.txt can be added in Appendix K
> (as I imagine you are aware).

Done.

--Robert

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Received on Tuesday, 30 January 2001 22:19:17 UTC