- From: Stan Devitt <jsdevitt@stratumtek.com>
- Date: Sun, 28 Jan 2001 09:26:05 -0500
- To: <www-math@w3.org>, "Susan Lesch" <lesch@w3.org>

Your comments with regard to chapter 4 and appendix C have all been addressed and fixed except the following . They will need a brief review by the group but can be dealt with quickly. Stan Devitt > > 4.4.5.11 > laplacian > [could be capitalized if Cartesian is] > Laplacian ********* Decision, plus review against mathematial convention on this issue Appendix C index ********** xslt scripting issue ? > C.2 > The Description of MMLdefinitions in C.2.x all say "See also . [?] > ********** xslt scripting issue ? > > C.2.8.1 through C.2.8.27 and C.2.11.14 > as described in Abramowitz and Stegun, section xx > These need to be links, maybe "see [A&S] section xx", to a > normative reference in a new "Normative" section of Appendix K. > Abramowitz, Milton, Irene A. Stegun (editors), Handbook of > Mathematical Fuctions: With Formulas, Graphs, and Mathmetical > Tables, Dover Publications Inc., December 1977, ISBN: 0-486-61272-4 *********** Needs external link and needs to address "self-contained" aspect. e.g. (extract section related to this definition and you get the entire definition - not just a hyperlink.) > > C.2.9.1 through C.2.10.7 > See CRC Standard Mathematical Tables and Formulae, editor: Dan > Zwillinger, CRC Press Inc., 1996, section xx > Same here, need to be links, maybe "see [Zwillinger] section xx", > to a normative reference in Appendix K. > Daniel Zwillinger (editor), Standard Mathematical Tables and > Formulae, CRC Press LLC, January 1996, ISBN: 0-849-32479-3 *********** Needs external link and needs to address "self-contained" aspect. e.g. (extract section related to this definition and you get the entire definition - not just a hyperlink.) ----- Original Message ----- From: "Susan Lesch" <lesch@w3.org> To: <www-math@w3.org> Sent: Sunday, January 28, 2001 5:01 AM Subject: Comments for PR-MathML2-20010108 [ stuff deleted ... ] > 4.2.3.2 int > If both lowlimit and uplimit schema > If both lowlimit and uplimit schemata [or schemas] Fixed. > > conjuction > conjunction Fixed. > > 4.3.2.8 > ionored > ignored Fixed. > > 4.4.2.8 par. 4 > is a the object > is the object > Fixed. > 4.4.2.16 par. 3 > to ba taken > to be taken > Fixed. > 4.4.3.6 par. 3 > arithemtic > arithmetic Fixed. > > 4.4.3.18 > conjuction > conjunction > Fixed. > 4.4.5.3 par. 4 > contaioning > containing Fixed. > > 4.4.5.11 > laplacian > [could be capitalized if Cartesian is] > Laplacian ***** Deferred pending further comments from group > > 4.4.5.3 par. 5 > differentation > differentiation Fixed. > > 4.4.12.5 > [Discussion is repeated under an extra "Example" heading.] Fixed. [ stuff deleted ....] > > C.1 par. 1 > (An index to the definitions is provided later in this document.) > [Where? Could you link to it here?] > *************** David ? > C.1.2 signature > square braces > square brackets > Fixed. > C.1.2 function > nary > n-ary > Fixed. > C.2 > The Description of MMLdefinitions in C.2.x all say "See also . [?] > ********** Style issue ? > C.2.2.9 par. 2 > itsself > itself Fixed. > > C.2.3.7 > itsself > itself Fixed. > > C.2.3.22 > (compex)->real > (complex)->real Fixed. > > C.2.4.8 par. 1 > quantites > quantities Fixed. > > C.2.5.6 par. 1 > quantifiy > quantify Fixed. > > C.2.5.8 par. 3 > implicitely > implicitly Fixed. > > C.2.5.10 par. 3 > respectivly > respectively Fixed. > > C.2.8.1 through C.2.8.27 and C.2.11.14 > as described in Abramowitz and Stegun, section xx > These need to be links, maybe "see [A&S] section xx", to a > normative reference in a new "Normative" section of Appendix K. > Abramowitz, Milton, Irene A. Stegun (editors), Handbook of > Mathematical Fuctions: With Formulas, Graphs, and Mathmetical > Tables, Dover Publications Inc., December 1977, ISBN: 0-486-61272-4 *********** Needs external link and needs to address "self-contained" aspect. e.g. (extract section related to this definition and you get the entire definition - not just a hyperlink.) > > C.2.9.1 through C.2.10.7 > See CRC Standard Mathematical Tables and Formulae, editor: Dan > Zwillinger, CRC Press Inc., 1996, section xx > Same here, need to be links, maybe "see [Zwillinger] section xx", > to a normative reference in Appendix K. > Daniel Zwillinger (editor), Standard Mathematical Tables and > Formulae, CRC Press LLC, January 1996, ISBN: 0-849-32479-3 *********** Needs external link and needs to address "self-contained" aspect. e.g. (extract section related to this definition and you get the entire definition - not just a hyperlink.) > > C.2.9.6 par. 1 and C.2.10.6 par. 1 (three times) > ith > i'th [or use ith globally] > Fixed.

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