Re: Comments for PR-MathML2-20010108

Your comments with regard to chapter 4 and appendix C have all been addressed
and fixed except the following .  They will need a brief review by the group but
can be dealt with quickly.


Stan Devitt



> 
> 4.4.5.11
> laplacian
> [could be capitalized if Cartesian is]
> Laplacian
*********  Decision, plus review against mathematial convention on this issue

Appendix C  index
********** xslt scripting issue ?

> C.2

> The Description of MMLdefinitions in C.2.x all say "See also . [?]
> 
 ********** xslt scripting issue ?

> 
> C.2.8.1 through C.2.8.27 and C.2.11.14
>      as described in Abramowitz and Stegun, section xx
> These need to be links, maybe "see [A&S] section xx", to a
> normative reference in a new "Normative" section of Appendix K.
>      Abramowitz, Milton, Irene A. Stegun (editors), Handbook of
>      Mathematical Fuctions: With Formulas, Graphs, and Mathmetical
>      Tables, Dover Publications Inc., December 1977, ISBN: 0-486-61272-4
***********  Needs external link and needs to address "self-contained" aspect.
e.g.  (extract section related to this definition and you get the entire definition - not
just a hyperlink.)

> 
> C.2.9.1 through C.2.10.7
>      See CRC Standard Mathematical Tables and Formulae, editor: Dan
>      Zwillinger, CRC Press Inc., 1996, section xx
> Same here, need to be links, maybe "see [Zwillinger] section xx",
> to a normative reference in Appendix K.
>      Daniel Zwillinger (editor), Standard Mathematical Tables and
>      Formulae, CRC Press LLC, January 1996, ISBN: 0-849-32479-3
***********  Needs external link and needs to address "self-contained" aspect.
e.g.  (extract section related to this definition and you get the entire definition - not
just a hyperlink.)



----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Susan Lesch" <lesch@w3.org>
To: <www-math@w3.org>
Sent: Sunday, January 28, 2001 5:01 AM
Subject: Comments for PR-MathML2-20010108



[ stuff deleted ... ]

> 4.2.3.2 int
> If both lowlimit and uplimit schema
> If both lowlimit and uplimit schemata [or schemas]
Fixed.

> 
> conjuction
> conjunction
Fixed.

> 
> 4.3.2.8
> ionored
> ignored
Fixed.

> 
> 4.4.2.8 par. 4
> is a the object
> is the object
>
Fixed. 

> 4.4.2.16 par. 3
> to ba taken
> to be taken
> 
Fixed.

> 4.4.3.6 par. 3
> arithemtic
> arithmetic
Fixed.

> 
> 4.4.3.18
> conjuction
> conjunction
> 
Fixed.

> 4.4.5.3 par. 4
> contaioning
> containing

Fixed.
> 
> 4.4.5.11
> laplacian
> [could be capitalized if Cartesian is]
> Laplacian
***** Deferred   pending further comments from group

> 
> 4.4.5.3 par. 5
> differentation
> differentiation
Fixed.

> 
> 4.4.12.5
> [Discussion is repeated under an extra "Example" heading.]
Fixed.


[ stuff deleted ....]


> 
> C.1 par. 1
> (An index to the definitions is provided later in this document.)
> [Where? Could you link to it here?]
>
 ***************  David ?
 
> C.1.2 signature
> square braces
> square brackets
> 
Fixed.

> C.1.2 function
> nary
> n-ary
> 
Fixed.

> C.2
> The Description of MMLdefinitions in C.2.x all say "See also . [?]
> 
 ********** Style issue ?

> C.2.2.9 par. 2
> itsself
> itself
Fixed.

> 
> C.2.3.7
> itsself
> itself
Fixed.

> 
> C.2.3.22
> (compex)->real
> (complex)->real
Fixed.

> 
> C.2.4.8 par. 1
> quantites
> quantities
Fixed.

> 
> C.2.5.6 par. 1
> quantifiy
> quantify
Fixed.
> 
> C.2.5.8 par. 3
> implicitely
> implicitly
Fixed.
> 
> C.2.5.10 par. 3
> respectivly
> respectively
Fixed.

> 
> C.2.8.1 through C.2.8.27 and C.2.11.14
>      as described in Abramowitz and Stegun, section xx
> These need to be links, maybe "see [A&S] section xx", to a
> normative reference in a new "Normative" section of Appendix K.
>      Abramowitz, Milton, Irene A. Stegun (editors), Handbook of
>      Mathematical Fuctions: With Formulas, Graphs, and Mathmetical
>      Tables, Dover Publications Inc., December 1977, ISBN: 0-486-61272-4
***********  Needs external link and needs to address "self-contained" aspect.
e.g.  (extract section related to this definition and you get the entire definition - not
just a hyperlink.)

> 
> C.2.9.1 through C.2.10.7
>      See CRC Standard Mathematical Tables and Formulae, editor: Dan
>      Zwillinger, CRC Press Inc., 1996, section xx
> Same here, need to be links, maybe "see [Zwillinger] section xx",
> to a normative reference in Appendix K.
>      Daniel Zwillinger (editor), Standard Mathematical Tables and
>      Formulae, CRC Press LLC, January 1996, ISBN: 0-849-32479-3
***********  Needs external link and needs to address "self-contained" aspect.
e.g.  (extract section related to this definition and you get the entire definition - not
just a hyperlink.)

> 
> C.2.9.6 par. 1 and C.2.10.6 par. 1 (three times)
> ith
> i'th [or use ith globally]
> 
Fixed.

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