Re: Announcing draft-duerst-iri-02.txt

Done, and updated.   Thanks, Martin.

At 13:08 02/12/02 -0800, Mark Davis wrote:
>Looks good. One minor point. You say:
>
>This example shows
>    that the case of escaping may not be preserved.
>
>"case" could be misread (e.g. wie "fall" uf tuetsch). Might be better to
>rephrase to:
>
>This example shows that the case (upper or lower) of ASCII characters used
>in escapes may not be preserved.
>
>Mark
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>----- Original Message -----
>From: "Martin Duerst" <duerst@w3.org>
>To: "Mark Davis" <mark.davis@jtcsv.com>
>Cc: <www-international@w3.org>
>Sent: Monday, December 02, 2002 12:52
>Subject: Re: Announcing draft-duerst-iri-02.txt
>
>
> > Hello Mark,
> >
> > Thanks for your comments.
> >
> > At 11:22 02/12/02 -0800, Mark Davis wrote:
> > >However, having examples that illustrate the correct conversions will
> > >ameliorate the problems with the wording. A few comments:
> > >
> > >1. You have
> > >
> > > >   This example contains the sequence '%fc', which is the same
>character
> > > >   as in the previous example, but represented using iso-8859-1.
> > >
> > >This is misleading: %fc may or may not be represent U+00FC LATIN SMALL
> > >LETTER U WITH DIAERESIS; it all depends on the encoding that it
>originated
> > >from. The wording would be better as:
> > >
> > >    This example contains the sequence '%fc', which would represent a
>U+00FC
> > >LATIN SMALL LETTER U WITH DIAERESIS in the iso-8859-1 encoding. (It would
> > >represent other characters in other encodings. For example, %fc in  in
> > >iso-8859-5 represents a U+045C CYRILLIC SMALL LETTER KJE.)
> >
> > Done, with a few tweaks.
> >
> >
> > >2. a minor wording item. For each example, you say "   This example "
>when
> > >it would be clearer to say "The following example".
> >
> > Done.
> >
> >
> > >3. using uppercase for the hex makes it stand out better. e.g.
> > >
> > >http://www.example.org/D%fcrst
> > >=>
> > >http://www.example.org/D%FCrst
> >
> > Good point, but in another part of the document, we say that
> > lower case should be used for escapes (to avoid gratuitous
> > differences).
> >
> > Uploaded the new version.
> >
> > Regards,    Martin.
> >

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