- From: John Foliot - WATS.ca <foliot@wats.ca>
- Date: Sun, 13 Aug 2006 12:31:09 -0700
- To: "'Costello, Roger L.'" <costello@mitre.org>, <www-html@w3.org>
Costello, Roger L. wrote: > Hi Folks, > > I have written a short article that attempts to tie together > - the ideas of abstraction as articulated by the famous > mathematician Alfred Whitehead with > - the ideas of information design using XHTML. > > Here is the URL to the article: > > http://www.xfront.com/abstraction-and-XHTML.html > > If you have suggestions on ways to improve the article I would > appreciate hearing them. Roger, While I think it is a great summary, I was kind of hoping for some meat here: the sizzle is great but where is the steak? And so my suggestion is, run with it; expand, illustrate, draw more parallels between your summary and Whitehead's article. But good start and cool starting point. Cheers! JF -- John Foliot foliot@wats.ca Web Accessibility Specialist WATS.ca - Web Accessibility Testing and Services http://www.wats.ca Phone: 1-613-482-7053
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