- From: Susan Lesch <lesch@w3.org>
- Date: Sat, 11 Nov 2000 17:15:50 -0800
- To: www-html-editor@w3.org
- Cc: w3t-comm@w3.org
Congratulations on your XHTML Basic Proposed
Recommendation [1]. Here are two minor comments.
In the Abstract, Host Language -> host language
[or else use caps in 1.2, and 4. Modularization
of XHTML didn't seem quite clear on this either.]
In clause 1.1:
HTML 4 was designed for large devices, overlapping
windows/frames menus, mouse input pointing device, high
powered CPU, large power supply.
This switches from plural to singular. How about:
HTML 4 was designed for large devices, overlapping
windows/frames menus, mouse input pointing devices, high
powered CPUs, and large power supplies.
[1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2000/PR-xhtml-basic-20001103/
Best wishes for your project,
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Susan Lesch - mailto:lesch@w3.org tel:+1.858.483.4819
World Wide Web Consortium (W3C) - http://www.w3.org/
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