Re: [Moderator Action] 7.3 / 7.4 Typos

Moderator: sent to www-forms@w3.org and www-forms-editor@w3.org
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From: <AndrewWatt2001@aol.com>
To: <www-forms@w3.org>; <www-forms-editor@w3.org>; <xforms@yahoogroups.com>
Sent: Friday, August 30, 2002 5:03 PM
Subject: [Moderator Action] 7.3 / 7.4 Typos


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> In 7.3 on the second line between the code examples the word "node" should
be
> inserted since instance data is expressed in nodes.
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> In 7.3. second code example the term "instance" (unqualified) is used. Is
> that short for xforms:instance i.e. the element or what?
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> In 7.4 line 1 "LocationPath" should be replaced by "location path".
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> In 7.4 line 2 "the a node" should be edited.
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> In 7.4 paragraph 2 line 1 "there restrictions" seems to lack an "are". All
> good WDs need their "are"s to fall back on. :)
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> In 7.4 paragraph 3 line 1 "predicate expression" should probably simply
read
> "predicate".
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> Same line - Is there a "comparison"?? ... Maybe a "relation" or
> "relationship"??
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> 7.4 Note - I wasn't aware that a predicate had "sides". Some editing is
> suggested.
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> It seems to me that the Note in 7.4 needs editing for clarity / coherence.
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> 7.4.2 line 1 - Should "data instance" be "instance data"?
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> Andrew Watt

Received on Tuesday, 3 September 2002 12:04:21 UTC