Re: "HTML5: Techniques for providing useful text alternatives" editorial comments

On 2015-07-23 12:50, Paul Cotton wrote:
> Editorial comments:

Changes applied (except for a couple where I reworded the sentence or 
replaced it)

> When an image is decorative and it is the author's intent that it not
> convey any information -> When an image is decorative and it is the
> author's intent that it not conveys any information

Come on, you can do the subjunctive, Paul! :-)
(I wouldn't have used wording like this at all, and if this example 
stays I'll rewrite it, so I'm glad you brought it to my attention. Very 
few authors are _trying_ to make things meaningless, except maybe in 
deconstructive poetry or something, although we all manage it from time 
to time)

Thanks again.

Liam

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Liam Quin, W3C
XML Activity Lead;
Digital publishing; HTML Accessibility