Re: PubReq: new WD of Shadow DOM on June 12

[+Ian]

Ian,

Could you give us a pointer to the decision explaining the approved wording please?

Meanwhile, Art, I suggest changing the document to include the approved wording. Doing so (and keeping the discussion open) will ensure the 
document can be published tomorrow.

Regards,

Jérémie

On 10/06/14 14:14, Arthur Barstow wrote:
> It seems to me the essence of the two text blocks is effectively the same. I think it would be helpful, if, for each of the four sentences, you
> identified the specific part(s) that is not acceptable (and cite the document that shows why WebApps text is not acceptable). Would you please
> do this?
>
> -Thanks, Art
>
> On 6/10/14 2:07 PM, Jérémie Astori wrote:
>> Hi Yves and Art,
>>
>> This document cannot be published as is because of the bottom overlay saying:
>>
>>     This Version of this Document Is Obsolete and Has Been Replaced
>>     This version of the specification is obsolete and has been replaced by the document at http://w3c.github.io/webcomponents/spec/shadow/. Do
>> not attempt to implement this version of the specification. Do not refer to this version except as a historical artifact.
>>
>> For wording, you can use the approved text that can be found on the appmanifest specification [1]:
>>
>>     THIS IS A WORK IN PROGRESS!
>>     This specification is for review and not for implementation! For the latest updates, including important bug fixes, please look at the
>> draft on GitHub instead.
>>
>> Let me know if you have any question.
>>
>> Regards,
>>
>> Jérémie
>>
>> [1]: http://www.w3.org/TR/2013/WD-appmanifest-20131217/
>>
>>
>> On 10/06/14 11:01, Yves Lafon wrote:
>>> On Tue, 10 Jun 2014, Jérémie Astori wrote:
>>>
>>>> [+Yves, +Xiaoqian]
>>>>
>>>> Yves or Xiaoqian,
>>>>
>>>> Could you install the document in TR please?
>>>
>>> Done,
>>>
>>>> On 10/06/14 09:35, Arthur Barstow wrote:
>>>>> WebApps would like to publish a new WD of the (standalone) Shadow DOM spec on June 12:
>>>>>
>>>>> <https://w3c.github.io/webcomponents/publish/shadow/WD-shadow-dom-20140612/>
>>>>>
>>>>> OK?
>>>>>
>>>>> -Thanks, AB
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>
>>>
>
>

Received on Wednesday, 11 June 2014 13:53:25 UTC