Re: Abstract etc.

On Apr 07, 2004, at 17:26, ext Jeremy Carroll wrote:

>>> Abstract:
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>>> The Semantic Web consists of many RDF graphs named
>>> by URIs.
>> Is this a widely accepted fact? Perhaps "The Semantic Web
>> can be viewed as consisting of many RDF graphs named by
>> URIs."
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> That's stylistic ... anyone else care to comment?
> I think I prefer starting with a supposedly objective statement that 
> makes the reader the think; rather than merely stating a point of 
> view. This sentence does summarize a significant chunk of the paper.
>

I see your point. I'll leave it to your discretion.

Patrick


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Patrick Stickler
Nokia, Finland
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Received on Thursday, 8 April 2004 01:12:10 UTC