RE: Near-final draft of TDL (PD) proposal

Looks pretty good.

The maths is taking shape in my head, Peter Patel-Schneider gave me a bit of
help at the WebOnt F2F.

I feel the introductory material might need moving around.

Jeremy


> -----Original Message-----
> From: Patrick Stickler [mailto:patrick.stickler@nokia.com]
> Sent: 16 January 2002 10:21
> To: Jeremy Carroll
> Cc: www-archive@w3.org
> Subject: Near-final draft of TDL (PD) proposal
>
>
>
> OK, I've pretty much gotten the proposal to a near final state. I
> still need to do some wordsmithing in appendix A, as there are
> some rather terse statements there that could use some verbal
> padding.
>
> But essentially all the details and important stuff are defined,
> I think.
>
> You can view the latest draft online at
>
>    http://www-nrc.nokia.com/sw/TDL.html
>
> There's a section placeholder for the math, and I hope what's
> now there is sufficient for you to provide that section (and I'm
> *very* grateful to you for doing it).
>
> Do you think we should wait until the math is inserted before
> giving it to the WG for a look? Or would it be OK to give it to
> them without the math?
>
> I'm hoping that it is sufficiently clear as-is, and that the math
> simply satisfies the needs of those who must see how it explicitly
> relates to the MT.
>
> Let me know what you think...
>
> Cheers,
>
> Patrick
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Received on Monday, 21 January 2002 05:05:18 UTC