RE: ATAG brief - review and suggestions

Hi Michele.

 

Thanks so much for this detailed comments and suggestions.

 

I have now process them, provided that I have also been tweaking these sections based on overall EOWG feedback on Friday.

 

See updated draft at:

https://atag-briefs--wai-intro-atag.netlify.app/standards-guidelines/atag/no-code/

 

Also, see attached word document with answers to your suggestions.

 

Given the tight schedule for these, please let us know by today EOB if you disagree with anything in my replies so that we can discuss in our planning meeting tomorrow morning your time.

 

Best.

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Daniel Montalvo

 

Accessibility Education and Training Specialist

W3C/WAI

 

From: Michele Williams <mawilliams031@outlook.com> 
Sent: Monday, November 14, 2022 7:23 PM
To: wai-eo-editors@w3.org; Sharron Rush <srush@knowbility.org>
Subject: Re: ATAG brief - review and suggestions

 

Hi again, here are a few suggestions for the No-Code brief based on the comments and updates from Shawn. I think the examples (especially the first 2) are the right ones for that audience and I still just suggested being a little more direct in how we introduce the reasoning. But overall they look good to me and hopefully you'll meet your deadline.

 

Ta ta for now,

Michele

 

On Sat, Nov 12, 2022 at 5:39 PM Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org <mailto:shawn@w3.org> > wrote:

Hi Michele, Daniel, and all,

Michele, where we need input the most right now is the no-code tools brief.

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I took a pass at minor revisions to the LMS brief based on input from Friday's EOWG meeting and Michele's edits on the social media draft.

I also added an issue to use the new design with the minimal header and the Page Contents on the right[1], which would increase text above the fold quite a bit. I left "Summary" heading for now for consistency and also comfort for those latched on to G86 [1].

It will be interesting how we end up wanting the education, social media, and no-code tools briefs to be different from each other.

EOWG previously agreed to the approach of the LMS brief, based on expertise in LMS worlds (Brent, Kris Anne, Jade, Howard, others?). For example, many people in that field are aware of accessibility. Yet many are focused on the tool creating accessible content, and not even thinking about the tool itself being accessible. Considerations such as those were the rationales behind several of the decisions we made the last few meetings, such as the wording in the summary. (It would be nice if we aren't compelled to spend much more time and energy revising the LMS one, as least until after December. :-)

Anyway, preview is here:
        https://nam12.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdeploy-preview-32--wai-intro-atag.netlify.app%2Fstandards-guidelines%2Fatag%2Feducation%2F <https://nam12.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdeploy-preview-32--wai-intro-atag.netlify.app%2Fstandards-guidelines%2Fatag%2Feducation%2F&amp;data=05%7C01%7C%7Cf03cd26271434deec2c508dac4fec21c%7C84df9e7fe9f640afb435aaaaaaaaaaaa%7C1%7C0%7C638038895700224449%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&amp;sdata=zk4eBVxdvhjBaCOeUnZXLsoJO3iFjyxzGNerP1MSFQE%3D&amp;reserved=0> &amp;data=05%7C01%7C%7Cf03cd26271434deec2c508dac4fec21c%7C84df9e7fe9f640afb435aaaaaaaaaaaa%7C1%7C0%7C638038895700224449%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&amp;sdata=zk4eBVxdvhjBaCOeUnZXLsoJO3iFjyxzGNerP1MSFQE%3D&amp;reserved=0

Best,
~Shawn

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On 12-Nov-22 10:06 AM, Michele Williams wrote:
> Hi everyone, as mentioned on our weekly call I was going to do some edits of the briefs via a Word document so I can put in comments as well as edits that are accessible and more easily generated than GitHub tickets.
> 
> I started with "Social Media" just because I grabbed a random one, and I'll ultimately take a pass at each one, but I'll have to come back to it on Monday. Nonetheless, in case folks are working over the weekend here's the Social Media one which includes comments both for that subject as well the more general layout.
> 
> I'm not sure who is on the "WAI editors" email list so I've cc'ed everyone I thought was involved and feel free to have me drop your individual email if this is sending you 2 messages.
> 
> Regards,
> Michele
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