Re: Voice Overs - minor fixes and possible change

Hiya,

On 12/12/2019 12:30 PM, Shadi Abou-Zahra wrote:
> Hi Shawn, Eric,
> 
> 
> On 12/12/2019 04:30, Shawn Henry wrote:
>> Summary: Given all below, I think we probably want to change the end-plate narration to:
>> 1: For resources on evaluating web accessibility, visit w3.o-r-g/W-A-I/evaluation
>> 2: For information on easy checks for web accessibility, visit w3.o-r-g/W-A-I/evaluation
>> 3: For information on tools for evaluating web accessibility, visit w3.o-r-g/W-A-I/evaluation
>> 4: For information on web accessibility conformance evaluation, visit w3.o-r-g/W-A-I/evaluation
>> 5: For information on involving users in web accessibility, visit w3.o-r-g/W-A-I/involve-users
>>
> [SNIP]
>>
>> * [high] for end-plate animation timing: show only the URI during the narration of it. Wait to show the resource name until after the URI is done in the narration.
>> (Rationale: For people who are viewing the video elsewhere (e.g., in YouTube), the most important thing they need from the whole video is the URI. If other text is appearing on the screen while the URI is being said, then that moving text gets attention and some of us cannot focus on and process the URI.)
> 
> End-plate narration has been changed as suggested above, so I assume that this second [high]-priority comment is moot.

Yup.

> 
> 
>> Also, I notice in this survey <https://www.w3.org/2002/09/wbs/35532/Videos_Eval_Set_Draft2/results>:
>> * At the end of the video I would prefer the title of the resource first in bold and then the URL without bold.

Note: This comment was from Estella in the survey.

>> * End cards in general – Super mild: I would prefer the name of the video/resource on top and the URL on bottom, with the URL being smaller or the same size as the video title. My brain starts reading the URL before realizing it is a URL. Having the title more prominent would give my brain more time to identify the content.
> 
> Note: This is a comment from Eric in the survey.
> 
> 
>> SLH input: I like the idea of the title first. The URI will have more clarity if it's at the end.
>> If we think these will be viewed a lot outside of the WAI website, then I think the URI should still be bigger and bolder.
> 
> Following this, and my assumption that most views for *these* videos will be from the WAI website, I conclude the following change:
> 
> - Put video name at the top in big and bold
> - Have URL below in smaller text
> - Keep URL typing-animation

OK.

> 
> I also suggest the following abbreviated video names appearing:
> 
> 1. Resource Overview

too generic. how about:
* Evaluation Overview
or
* Evaluation Resources
or
* Evaluation Resources Overview

> 2. Easy Checks
> 3. Evaluation Tools
> 4. Conformance Evaluation
> 5. Involving Users

strong +1 Less text is better, imo.

> 
> Alternatively we could use the full names:
> 
> 1. Resources on Evaluating Web Accessibility
> 2. Easy Checks for Web Accessibility
> 3. Tools for Evaluating Web Accessibility
> 4. Web Accessibility Conformance Evaluation
> 5. Involving Users in Web Accessibility

-1

~Shawn

> 
> Thoughts?
> 
> Thanks,
>    Shadi
>

Received on Thursday, 12 December 2019 20:35:50 UTC