Thanks for your survey comments

Dear Rachel,

Thanks for your comments to the survey. Here are the actions I took as a
result:

- "This article defines the purpose and guides how to construct the
business case for web accessibility that is appropriate and relevant to
organizations of different types."

rewrite as: "This article defines the purpose of a business case for web
accessibility and guides users through the construction of business cases
that are appropriate and relevant to organizations of different types."
**SR: Section rewritten, this sentence was omitted**

Do we want a citation for this? "Extend Market Reach: The global market of
people with disabilities is over 1 billion people with a spending power of
more than $6 trillion."
**SR: The citation is provided in the 4th bullet, does it need to be in
both places? **


WHO NEEDS A...
Make Business lower case: "Determining which of the many benefits of web
accessibility are most relevant in your business environment will help you
build the most compelling Business case for your situation."
**
**SR: Done, thank you!**


CASE STUDY: APPLE
"Apple engineers have been innovators in the accessibility space since the
inception of the company, both willing to listen and work with outside
constituents. As well, the company anticipates market direction by
integrating disability needs into product development."

Suggested rewrite: "Apple engineers have been innovators in the
accessibility space since the inception of the company. They both listen to
and work with outside constituents as well as anticipate market direction
by integrating disability needs into product development."
**SR: Submitted as written by the Apple accessibility lead. I have asked
for her permission to change based on your suggestion, which I agree is
clarifying**

MINIMIZE LEGAL...
Lowercase Business: "Consideration of the cost and risk of inaction is a
critical aspect of any Business case. "
**SR: done, thanks**

SHARE YOUR EXPERIENCE
When a story is shared, is there a permissions agreement for
sharing/posting or anything similar?
**SR: There is no formal sharing agreement, is one needed? We have offered
everyone to be able to post on the* WAI-Engage wiki*
<https://www.w3.org/community/wai-engage/wiki/Case_studies>. Whether to
integrate into the main document has been left to editor discretion. Does
that seem clear enough? Is more needed?**

Once again, my thanks for your time and useful comments Rachel!

Best,
Sharron
-- 
Sharron Rush | Executive Director | Knowbility.org | @knowbility
*Equal access to technology for people with disabilities*