- From: Shadi Abou-Zahra <shadi@w3.org>
- Date: Wed, 22 Nov 2017 09:12:05 +0100
- To: Nic Steenhout <nic@knowbility.org>
- Cc: EO Editors <wai-eo-editors@w3.org>
Hi Nic, On 21/11/2017 21:07, Nic Steenhout wrote: > Thanks Shadi, > > I've seen your comments and responded to them on GitHub. In short, I > have no significant issues with them. > > I was not aware that a full review had already been done on this. It > appears in the EOWG Resource management spreadsheet and is marked as > "Nic can take a pass at it", and is one of the 5 resources Shawn and I > had agreed to get going first. > https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1nJb1_PNbT6bMEz0AuWA1HRj-w2LeujXMatvmajYS4is/edit#gid=554902173 > > I have been doing incremental changes and was planning on continuing to > do so until the entire document had been reviewed for Plain English and > simplification of sentences. Yes, by all means - if that's your agreement with the planning team then please keep the edits coming! Just wanted to check since I had no idea. Many thanks, Shadi > Nic > > On Tue, Nov 21, 2017 at 1:42 PM, Shadi Abou-Zahra <shadi@w3.org > <mailto:shadi@w3.org>> wrote: > > Hi Nic, > > Thank you for your edits on the Inclusion document! > > Your previous two pull requests were rather minor but useful > editorial tweaks, so I just merged them straight-up. > > This time your changes were more substantial, and I disagree with > some of the changes. Sometimes they are also technically incorrect. > So I made changes to your pull request, and added comments on what I > did and why. > > Please have a look at my changes. You can edit this pull request > again, if you want to make changes. Otherwise, let me know when to > merge them. > > Note that this document was already fully reviewed by EOWG and was > only stuck pending a review from CoGa group. With these changes, I > think we will need another approval for publication round. I was not > aware that this resource was active again. Are your edits prompted > by some request from the EOWG Planning Team? If so, do you know what > the plans are? > > Best, > Shadi > > > On 20/11/2017 18:43, Nicolas Steenhout wrote: > > Edited section "Accessibility and Usability" to reduce sentence > complexity and front-load content. > > ------------------------------------------------------------------------ > > > You can view, comment on, or merge this pull request > online at: > > https://github.com/w3c/wai-inclusion/pull/37 > <https://github.com/w3c/wai-inclusion/pull/37> > > > Commit Summary > > * Update index.md <http://index.md> > > > File Changes > > * *M* index.md <http://index.md> > <https://github.com/w3c/wai-inclusion/pull/37/files#diff-0 > <https://github.com/w3c/wai-inclusion/pull/37/files#diff-0>> (49) > > > Patch Links: > > * https://github.com/w3c/wai-inclusion/pull/37.patch > <https://github.com/w3c/wai-inclusion/pull/37.patch> > * https://github.com/w3c/wai-inclusion/pull/37.diff > <https://github.com/w3c/wai-inclusion/pull/37.diff> > > — > You are receiving this because you are subscribed to this thread. > Reply to this email directly, view it on GitHub > <https://github.com/w3c/wai-inclusion/pull/37 > <https://github.com/w3c/wai-inclusion/pull/37>>, or mute the > thread > <https://github.com/notifications/unsubscribe-auth/AHCrsW2ZMKm0lMevcKEz5-yplUvn2T4Cks5s4bpOgaJpZM4Qko-K > <https://github.com/notifications/unsubscribe-auth/AHCrsW2ZMKm0lMevcKEz5-yplUvn2T4Cks5s4bpOgaJpZM4Qko-K>>. > > > -- > Shadi Abou-Zahra - http://www.w3.org/People/shadi/ > <http://www.w3.org/People/shadi/> > Accessibility Strategy and Technology Specialist > Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI) > World Wide Web Consortium (W3C) > > -- Shadi Abou-Zahra - http://www.w3.org/People/shadi/ Accessibility Strategy and Technology Specialist Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI) World Wide Web Consortium (W3C)
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