Re: [w3c/wai-inclusion] Update index.md (#37)

Hi Nic,

Thank you for your edits on the Inclusion document!

Your previous two pull requests were rather minor but useful editorial 
tweaks, so I just merged them straight-up.

This time your changes were more substantial, and I disagree with some 
of the changes. Sometimes they are also technically incorrect. So I made 
changes to your pull request, and added comments on what I did and why.

Please have a look at my changes. You can edit this pull request again, 
if you want to make changes. Otherwise, let me know when to merge them.

Note that this document was already fully reviewed by EOWG and was only 
stuck pending a review from CoGa group. With these changes, I think we 
will need another approval for publication round. I was not aware that 
this resource was active again. Are your edits prompted by some request 
from the EOWG Planning Team? If so, do you know what the plans are?

Best,
   Shadi


On 20/11/2017 18:43, Nicolas Steenhout wrote:
> Edited section "Accessibility and Usability" to reduce sentence 
> complexity and front-load content.
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> https://github.com/w3c/wai-inclusion/pull/37
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>         Commit Summary
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>   * Update index.md
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>         File Changes
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>   * *M* index.md
>     <https://github.com/w3c/wai-inclusion/pull/37/files#diff-0> (49)
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Shadi Abou-Zahra - http://www.w3.org/People/shadi/
Accessibility Strategy and Technology Specialist
Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI)
World Wide Web Consortium (W3C)

Received on Tuesday, 21 November 2017 18:43:11 UTC