- From: Andrew Arch <andrew.arch@gmail.com>
- Date: Tue, 2 Feb 2016 06:42:44 +1100
- To: Kevin White <kevin@w3.org>
- Cc: wai-eo-editors <wai-eo-editors@w3.org>, Andrew Arch <andrew.arch@digital.gov.au>
- Message-ID: <CAHWwbRWkrN49B76tkBBXyXEtg+jkHXEDeUh_90O8gSpivbH3_g@mail.gmail.com>
Thanks Kevin, adds clarity around feedback. Andrew On Monday, 1 February 2016, Kevin White <kevin@w3.org> wrote: > Hi Andrew, > > I have changed the byline as you suggest. I think it does better highlight > that there is a need to be open to and accepting of user feedback. I also > took a look at the last sentence and agree that it is a bit opaque. I have > changed it to: > > “Make it easy for website users to submit feedback on accessibility and > ensure that any feedback is used when considering future improvements.” > > Hopefully this addresses your concerns, > > Thanks > > Kevin > > On 26 Jan 2016, at 11:00, Andrew Arch <andrew.arch@gmail.com > <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','andrew.arch@gmail.com');>> wrote: > > Hi Kevin, > > Sorry to miss your email before the long weekend over here. > > Yes - I can see it being covered in 'incorporate user feedback' (rather > than 'monitor websites'). > > Maybe the byline could be changed to "Invite user feedback and use it to > help guide improvement activities and identify areas in need of attention." > The closing sentence (Provide mechanisms to gather feedback to be used to > inform future improvements.) is probably sufficient text for this section, > but maybe could be clearer :) > > Cheers, Andrew > > On 21 January 2016 at 22:33, Kevin White <kevin@w3.org > <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','kevin@w3.org');>> wrote: > >> Hi Andrew, >> >> I am just following up on one of your comments in this week’s survey. You >> mention about the repetition; "However, are we missing something about >> "inviting feedback" when issues arise?” >> >> This could be covered more in Incorporate user feedback >> <http://w3c.github.io/wai-dynamic-planning/sustain/#incorporate-user-feedback> or >> in Monitor websites >> <http://w3c.github.io/wai-dynamic-planning/sustain/#monitor-websites> depending >> on how you are thinking about it. Can you expand a bit on what you might >> add and where? >> >> Thanks >> >> Kevin >> > > > > -- > Andrew Arch > Canberra, Australia > > “Man does not cease to play because he grows old. > Man grows old because he ceases to play.” > George Bernard Shaw > > > -- "You have to take on challenges to experience living." Boris von Engelbrechten
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