Editorial comments for BAD

On the Survey page, it should be "This Week's" instead of "This Weeks's" in both headings.
 
On the home page, we need to remove the word "down" from the blurb under "Lack of brains hinders research." In other words, it should read:


Brain donations: huge drop off in brain donations due to the 'success' of 'Slow Traffic, Safe Streets' policy
not:


Brain donations: huge drop off in brain donations down due to the 'success' of 'Slow Traffic, Safe Streets' policy
Throughout the document, the first word in each sentence that follows a run-in headings should be capped. For example,
 
On the "News" page, in the last sentence under the heading "Tough Wahoonie," the word "Ordnance" should be "ordinance." ("Ordnance" is explosives; "ordinance" is a type of law.)
 
In the same sentence, "City" and "Winter" should be lower case; they are not proper nouns.
 
Similarly, in the second column, these words are not proper nouns and should be lower case:
in all stories, Mayor (except where the mayor's name immediately follows it)
in the first story:
Judge
Judges
Trombone Forgery
On the same page, there is an extra period at the end of "Your Shout."
 
On the same page, the last word should be "off," not "in."
 
If I have time to view the other pages, I will send edits for them, too.
 
Thanks!
 
Cliff
 
 
Cliff Tyllick
Usability assessment coordinator
Agency Communications Division
Texas Commission on Environmental Quality
512-239-4516
Cliff.Tyllick@tceq.texas.gov
 
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