editorial comments on Re: Final WAI new nav and updated pages

Shawn and EO-Editors:

Shawn, as we've been discussing, please find attached a text file.

It contains my comments on the eight pages.

Item 1, the Site Map, has the most comments, by far, so you might 
want to focus on the other seven pages as those changes will be the 
fastest to fix.

I hope this is helpful,. Please let me know if you've any questions.

Best,
Jennifer