How People with Disabilities Use the Web comments

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Hi Shadi,

This resource is looking awesome! With a few changes, I support publishing it as a Draft for public review. I also have many minor edit suggestions, most of which are copyedit-level comments. One page I think needs more significant editing, but I think those can wait for the next round after the public review.

* Overview page <http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/PWD-Use-Web/2009/Overview>
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* Stories of Web Users <http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/PWD-Use-Web/2009/stories>
Some issues are in the e-mail archived at http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/wai-eo-editors/2011Apr/0013.html which we addressed in the EOWG telecon minuted at http://www.w3.org/2011/04/08-eo-minutes
Attached file has additional comments.

* Diversity of Web Users <http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/PWD-Use-Web/2009/diversity>
Attached file has comments.

* Diversity in Web Use <http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/PWD-Use-Web/2009/browsing>
This page I think needs more work. It's too complicated and hard to follow. I wonder about simplifying it and not trying to include so much information? Or, integrating the information in the Diversity of Web Users page, now that we have the expand-collapse functionality? However, I don't think that should hold up publication of the entire resource suite as a Draft. I look forward to talking through ideas and options.
(My edit suggestions were very significant and I didn't finish on paper or type up the ones I had. I think need to look at a higher level at what to do with this page.)

* Accessibility Principles <http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/PWD-Use-Web/2009/principles>
I think this page could become a key page that we point to as an introduction to web accessibility standards, especially WCAG 2. Because of its potential, I think it is worth polishing even more than the other pages.
Attached file has comments.

Thanks for all your hard work on this! It is really coming together.

Best,
~Shawn

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