- From: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
- Date: Mon, 08 Aug 2011 17:46:49 -0500
- To: Shadi Abou-Zahra <shadi@w3.org>
- CC: wai-eo-editors <wai-eo-editors@w3.org>
Received on Monday, 8 August 2011 22:46:58 UTC
On 7/19/2011 8:11 AM, Shawn Henry wrote: > * Diversity in Web Use <http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/PWD-Use-Web/2009/browsing> > This page I think needs more work. It's too complicated and hard to follow. I wonder about simplifying it and not trying to include so much information? Or, integrating the information in the Diversity of Web Users page, now that we have the expand-collapse functionality? However, I don't think that should hold up publication of the entire resource suite as a Draft. I look forward to talking through ideas and options. > (My edit suggestions were very significant and I didn't finish on paper or type up the ones I had. I think need to look at a higher level at what to do with this page.) > > Hi Shadi, As you requested, attached are comments on the first part of this page. I'm happy to talk through higher level issues when you would like. Regards, ~Shawn
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