[wbs] response to 'EOWG Call for Review: Using Combined Expertise to Evaluate Web Accessibility'

Here are the answers submitted to 'EOWG Call for Review: Using Combined
Expertise to Evaluate Web Accessibility' (Education and Outreach Working
Group) for Andrew Arch.



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Using Combined Expertise to Evaluate Web Accessibility
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 * ( ) I accept this version of the document as is
 * (x) I accept this version of the document, and suggest changes below
 * ( ) I accept this version of the document only with the changes below
 * ( ) I do not accept this version of the document because of the
comments below
 * ( ) I abstain (not vote)





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Comments
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Comments on the document, formatted as described above.

Comments (or a URI pointing to your comments): 
priority: [required for this version]
location: Appendix
current wording: link from "Evaluation Tools for Web Accessibility"
suggested revision: needs to link to the revised Eval Tools Overview page
rationale: Document needs to be up-to-date

priority: [editor's discretion]
location: "Approaches ..." [several places]
current wording: relying on outside experts
suggested revision: relying on external experts
rationale: clarity

priority: [editor's discretion]
location: Recommended Expertise
current wording: "Effective evaluation of Web accessibility requires more
than simply running an evaluation tool over a Web site."
suggested revision: "Effective evaluation of Web accessibility requires
more than simply getting a report frm an evaluation tool."

priority: [editor's discretion]
location: Recommended expertise
current wording: "The following list includes recommended expertise across
a variety of areas"
suggested revision: "The following list includes areas of expertise that
will improve the evaluation"

priority: [editor's discretion]
location: Communicating Results
current wording: "Collaborative teams may want to give particular
attention"
suggested revision: "Collaborative teams will want to give particular
attention"

priority: [editor's discretion]
location: Communicating Results
current wording: "represent the combined perspectives of different
evaluators"
suggested revision: "represent the combined perspectives of evaluators
with different skills and experience"

priority: [editor's discretion] or [list for next version]
location: Getting and giving feedback
suggested revision: add a note about the importance of getting feedback
from other users of the site and having the person/team consider this as a
valid augmentation of their own expertise. Users providing feedbak can also
add real value to improvement process.



These answers were last modified on 17 March 2006 at 03:59:22 U.T.C.
by Andrew Arch

Answers to this questionnaire can be set and changed at
http://www.w3.org/2002/09/wbs/35532/expertise-2006/ until 2006-03-18.

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Received on Friday, 17 March 2006 04:02:12 UTC