Eval suite review

Shawn,
Here are some comments. Pardon the delay.
Thanks,
Sailesh
1. In Preliminary Reviews: (re-organized)

Ref: • Web pages with scripts or applications that perform functionality.

Reword as:??
Rationale: Applications do not "perform functionality"  but functionality is built into applications

2. In Conformance Evaluation of Web Sites for Accessibility (re-organized)

Ref: Note: Browser extensions and other plug-in evaluation tools (such as...
provide functionality to help perform many of these manual checks.

Reword as:
Browser extensions and other plug-in evaluation tools (such as...
are able to help perform many of these manual checks.

Rationale: feel this wording is better

3. In Specific Contexts (re-organized)

Debate on including a section on  accessibility issues relating to content that provides security  for an application. For instance, the accessibility issues  for login  to an online bank or for making electronic purchases or opening an account are peculiar to  such content  and may not be experienced elsewhere in the application. 

Sailesh Panchang
Senior Accessibility Engineer
Deque Systems (www.deque.com)
11180 Sunrise Valley Drive, Suite #400
Reston VA 21091
E-mail: sailesh.panchang@deque.com
Tel: 703-225-0380 (ext 105)

Received on Friday, 16 September 2005 13:59:47 UTC