- From: Andrew Arch <andrew.arch@nils.org.au>
- Date: Sat, 10 Sep 2005 00:07:01 +1000
- To: <wai-eo-editors@w3.org>
Hi Eds, Copy edit suggestions (http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/eval/conformance.html): 1. Currently we have "determine what level of accessibility a Web site meets" Suggest: "determine what level of accessibility an existing Web site meets" 2. Currently we have: "without using the mouse tab through the links and form controls" Suggest: "without using the mouse "tab" through the links and form controls" - put TAB in double quotes as the TAB key is not the keystroke to use in some browsers, eg. Opera 3. The suggestion to "change the display color to gray scale" is not adequate - can we link to some of the tools that utilise the Draft W3C algorithm such as http://www.nils.org.au/ais/web/resources/contrast_analyser/index.html or http://www.juicystudio.com/services/colourcontrast.php 4. Currently in 3.4 we have: "Read over the selected sample of pages: is the text clear and simple to the extent appropriate for the purpose of the Web site" Suggest: "Read over the selected sample of pages: is the text clear and simple to the extent appropriate for the purpose of the Web site and do the links make sense without the surrounding text" Should we also suggest the use of "readability" tools such as suggested in http://www.standards-schmandards.com/index.php?2005/09/09/24-measuring-text- readability or provided by http://www.juicystudio.com/services/readability.php even if we don't point to these tools? Andrew _________________________________ Dr Andrew Arch Manager Online Accessibility Consulting Accessible Information Solutions, NILS Ph +61 (0)3 9864 9282; Fax +61 (0)3 9864 9370; Mobile 0438 755 565 http://www.accessibleinfo.org.au/ | http://www.ozewai.org/2005/ Member, Education & Outreach Working Group, W3C Web Accessibility Initiative http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/ National Information & Library Service Vision Australia __________________________________________________________________ << ella for Spam Control >> has removed Spam messages and set aside Later for me You can use it too - and it's FREE! http://www.ellaforspam.com
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