Copy Edit: under Wizard Interfaces

From: Corcoran, Charmane <corcora1@ais.msu.edu>
Date: Mon, 28 Feb 2005 11:15:20 -0500
To: <wai-eo-editors@w3.org>
Message-ID: <2F76B757AA622D4DB0488C98B5EF81B65C0B83@ais-ex1.ais.msu.edu>

http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/eval/selectingtools.html

 

Under Wizard Interfaces 

Change: “evaluate how appropriate each of these descriptions are”

To: “evaluate their individual appropriateness”

 

Best not to end on a verb in English.

 

Charmane

Received on Monday, 28 February 2005 19:56:12 UTC