- From: <Andrew.Arch@visionaustralia.org.au>
- Date: Fri, 7 May 2004 13:30:59 +1000
- To: wai-eo-editors@w3.org
From Fragmentation onwards Fragmentation - para 1, dot pt 1: Is: "... technical meaning may change ..." Suggest: "... technical meaning may change or become ambiguous ..." Fragmentation - para 2, dot pt 4: Is: "... yet there is a great need ..." Suggest: "... yet anyone is welcome to join the working groups developing the guidelines, and there is a great need ... Fragmentation - para 2, dot pt 5: Is: "... evolve, and that ..." Suggest: "... evolve - - that ..." Action Steps - Para 1: Is: "... and easier to test" Suggest: "... and easier to test for conformance" regards, Andrew _________________________________ Dr Andrew Arch Manager Online Accessibility Consulting National Information & Library Service, Australia Ph 613 9864 9222; Fax 613 9864 9210; Mobile 0438 755 565 http://www.nils.org.au/ | http://www.it-test.com.au/ | http://www.ozewai.org/ Member, Education & Outreach Working Group, W3C Web Accessibility Initiative http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/ NILS - A Joint Venture between the Royal Victorian Institute for the Blind, The Royal Blind Society of NSW, and Vision Australia Foundation.
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