New Editors' Draft

Kim and I have been doing a detailed editorial pass on the Implementing 
document. This new draft includes the work done at the meeting of 23 
August, as well as our edits so far (through 1.5)

http://www.w3.org/WAI/UA/2012/ED-UAAG20-20120819/
http://www.w3.org/WAI/UA/2012/ED-IMPLEMENTING-UAAG20-20120819/

Most of our changes are editorial (punctuation, verb tenses, clarifying 
sentence structure, standardizing styles), but we did make some 
non-controversial changes to the Examples (2 adds, 1 move and 1 deletion 
of a repetitive example). I do not think these require group review, but 
for those who would like to see what we have done, I put together a 
quick Difference document (comparing to 16 August):

http://www.w3.org/WAI/UA/2012/ED-IMPLEMENTING-UAAG20-20120819/htmldiff.htm

Please let me know if you have any comments or if you think these 
changes need to be approved by the group.

Received on Friday, 24 August 2012 15:32:37 UTC