Re: Feedback: Editor's Draft Section 1.4, minor editorial fixes

Hi Kelly,

No sorry the draft isn't back on the wiki. I don't think the wiki is 
tenable with the number of hours I have as UAAG staff support.

I agree with your suggested change.

Cheers,
-Jan


Kelly Ford wrote:
> Hello,
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> I wasn’t sure if the editor’s draft was back in a Wiki.  Minor changes 
> suggested to section 1.4. 
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> Current:
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> 1.4 Relation to general software design guidelines and other specifications
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> One the goals of the authors of this document is to ensure that the 
> requirements are compatible with other good software design practices. 
> However, this document does not purport to be a complete guide to good 
> software design. For instance, the general topic of user interface 
> design for computer software exceeds the scope of this document, though 
> some user interface requirements have been included because of their 
> importance to accessibility.
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> Proposed:
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> Remove a couple uses of good and change the goals part to indicate the 
> goal of the document, not the author.
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>  
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> One of the goals of this document is to ensure that the requirements are 
> compatible with other software design practices. However, this document 
> does not purport to be a complete guide to good software design. For 
> instance, the general topic of user interface design for computer 
> software exceeds the scope of this document, though some user interface 
> requirements have been included because of their importance to 
> accessibility.
> 
>  
> 
> Kelly
> 

-- 
Jan Richards, M.Sc.
User Interface Design Specialist
Adaptive Technology Resource Centre (ATRC)
Faculty of Information Studies
University of Toronto

   Email: jan.richards@utoronto.ca
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Received on Thursday, 6 March 2008 16:34:29 UTC